No! Not Aziz!!!

Paint

Peering over the artist’s shoulder
A most vibrant scene I saw him paint
I could swear I was amongst the twelve people
Namely the coroneted one in the center of the table
This work made mine seem piercingly quaint

The Well

A somber mood I was that day
When I found the other place
From the path I found myself astray
Where a water-filled well I found with grace
A shove sent me to drowning in dismay

Acheron

Drifting timid along the stream of woe
A cold journey into the midst of Hell
To the rancor shores where the dead souls swell
Charon showed me the cursed torment below
Dreadful aversion, thus, began to grow
The terrors I witnessed I shall not tell
How wondrous I rose from where I had fell
Returning with my long lost soul in tow
Across the black river I commandeered
The ferry from its infernal captain
To return to the blue world once more
Escaping from all that I had once feared
Where our fellows burn in their hollow sin
In the words that line our forgotten lore





all^^-(C) Brett Holden





afternoon...it is time to update you on the poll.





Which one is your favorite?





Coheed & Cambria: 18 votes - 85%


Nine Inch Nails: 0


Modest Mouse: 1 vote - 4%


Silversun Pickups - 0


Say Anything - 2 votes - 9%


Mars Volta: 0





well...well...out of 21 votes so far Coheed & Cambria is in the lead with an outstanding 18 votes. Owing to the fact that most of those votes came from registered users on Cobalt & Calcium...well whatever.





hope you've enjoyed the my three poems. I wrote those about seven months ago now.